Story by Evan, M.Suleman, Justin, Amel, QT, Alweena
In Korea, a long time ago Manuk is looking for a piece of metal. He is in a crashed plane. He finds some small metal. He keeps the metal in his pocket. he sings a song and leaves the airplane.
After that Manuk went to the railway track. Next he had a screw that was metal and had a small magnet on that. After he put on his ear at the track and heard the noise of the train he put the magnet on the track. But after a while the magnet came down then he put the magnet up again and the train went over it.
After he went to the railway he went to the old town. When he was at the town he played soldier game. Then he hid and walked away but he went back. the town he went to was old, rusty and broken. But it was still OK to be a home for some people.
As soon as Manuk finished from travelling around the town, he went to an open field sand. Manuk were hiding behind two huge rocks.
''Bam!Bam!'' shouted Manuk while he was pretending to be a soldier. He throw a tiny hard rock. It accidentally hit a man on a bicycle. then Manuk ran away as fast as a car to his house because he doesn't want to get in trouble.
When Manuk got home he saw a parcel on the beige shed. Curiously he opened the parcel and he found somethings that was his dads. He found stinky, old, black boots, a silver shiny medal and finally a old black wallet that has a black and white picture of him and his dad together. After that he used the medal and the black boots and pretended that he was a soldier and guarding his house. Soon he went in his house.
The window has glass in it. The Manuk is in home. There are pictures on the wall. There is curtain on the wall too. The mum came., the Manuk is sleeping. There is sunlight on the ground. Before he was sleeping he was playing with his toys and he was having fun. And then he was surprised that why his mum did not come until now. The boy also didn't eat a drop of food. Then his mum came and he was sleeping.
What do you think will happen next?
The movie makes me sad.
ReplyDeleteI like it and it was nice.
ReplyDeleteI think The next day Manuk's mother would say that his Father died in the war and Manuk was Sad, also his mother asked what did he do when she was gone?so Manuk lied and told her Mother that he played with his toys yesterday.
ReplyDeleteWhen his mother comes home she might give him a box of toys because of his birthday. Manuk at his young age does not realize his life is going to be sad and his mum might feel unhappy too as he cannot able to see anymore his dad.
ReplyDeleteI think that when manuks mum come she will see him asleep and when manuk wake up he will tell her that he dreamed that his father died in the war.
ReplyDeleteMrs Nicholson you can publish this if you want.But I wrote "when Manuk got home he saw a parcel on the beige shed near his house"
ReplyDeleteSorry, I missed Amel's name out..... should be correct now!
Delete