At the video the place were really nonsense. It was nonsense because instead of the sea it was a sky! I see that the turtle were much bigger than the ship. The was only one person on the ship he were really old grandpa. There were not much thing on the ship, no food or water, but there is only two thing telescope and an old wood box.
There was a old man flying in a boat with lots of machines to help the boat fly.Soon the boat's machine started to stop, but he did't fall.Then he saw lots of turtle flying and then he put a brown rope to a turtle's neck.Suddenly the rope is broken,the old man was sad and worried he would be stuck in the sky.After that the last turtle came,so the old man jumped to the turtle's back...he was so amazed he landed in a amazing Island!
The sky was so peaceful. Everything moved slowly including the music. The ship was floating and not moving. I wish I could fly like the turtles. I wish I could have an adventure like that.
Only once in a lifetime the man saw a large turtel flying.Only once in a lifetime the man jump so far on the turtel.Only once in a lifetime the man stuck at a high sky that no body see.Only once in a lifetime the man fly with a large turtel.After the story: Maybe the turtel was going to their own house with the man.
The old man we're pulling a rope to take something. Then he heard a big noise and it was an enourmous turtle. He saw that turtle flying and there we're lot's and lot's of them. He was thinking about to fix the ship but he cannot so he use the turtle to help him move. Suddenly the rope began to brake and the ship stop's and he saw the last turtle then he jump down and he live he's ship and he continue his big journey. He also thinking to travel the world and he was going for an adventure.
1. The man is driving the hot air ballon. 2. There were so many turtles flying in the air. 3. The turtle is pulling the hot air ballon. 4. Turtles are going at the same way. 5. The man is jumping to the turtle two times.
In the morning the man was fixing his flying ship. Then something fell down and he almost cry. After that he saw a group of flying turtles. Then he saw one and grab the rope and it was on the turtle's neck but it broke. In the end he saw a small turtle and he was sad because he need to leave the ship.
Once in a lifetime, an old man called Archie,Archie was going on a holiday. He went on a cruise ship called 'One Direction'. Suddenly the ship sank deeply, but he is the only one who can survive. After a few years something magic happends... his ship fly up to the sky. At that moment he saw thousand enourmous turtle, at last the ship couldn't sail, so he tide a rope on a turtle and finally it brokes.
The man need to get out of the sky. The man saw a giat turtle at the sky. When the man jump off at the turtle he is thinking that he will miss his flying boat. The man heard that the turtle shout and he was surprice.
Only once in the life time the man stuck in the high sky.Only once in lifetime the man saw a huge turtel flying.Only once in lifetime the man jump so far to go on the turtel.Only once in a lifetime the man fly with the huge turtel.After the story:Maybe the turtel bring the man to their home.
1. The man was suprised when he saw giant turtles flying. 2. I think there were 10 turtles flying. 3. One turtle was left behind.4. The rope was broken because the turtle pull to strong. 5. I think the man and the turtle will go to a king house
The old man was fixing the ship.He saw a gigantic turtle flying and he couldn't believe it.HE also thinking about to make his ship move.So he throw a rope on to the turtle's neck.Suddenly the rope began to brake but he saw the last turtle and he jump on the turtle and he continue his juorney and he was thinking that he could fly around the world and he think's he had an adventures
The man travelling in the sky using his boat with air balloon. The man lost his engine so he was stuck in the middle of the clouds. The man need to get out of the sky. The man wanted to catch the giant turtle to get away from the boat balloon. The flying boat was stuck so the man was thinking that he will miss his flying boat so he jumped off the giant turtle.
Once in life time there was wooden boat. And the onwner of the ship was an old man. Suddenly it got brocken a bit. The old man got a brown dark. A huge army of turtls heading to the boat.
The man need to move the huge,long ship. Then he saw a enormous huge turtle flying. He use the long,thick rope, then the rope is pulled by the turtle. After that saw another small turtle. Finally he jump and sit on the turtles back.
The man was stuck on a big floating ship. He saw a flying turtle in the land of nonsense he was in. He threw a rope around a flying turtles neck so he could move and not be stuck. Then he saw a smaller turtle. He decided to jump off the ship and on to the turtles back.
I watched the video and it was about a man and flying turtles. This man tried to strap a rope around a turtle's neck because his ship wasn't running and able to move. He was hoping that the turtle would pull his ship but it didn't work. Then there was this other turtle and he jumped on it's back. Then he flew off with all of the other turtles.
Thank you katie. Ask your teacher to check out the five sentnce challenge webpage - http://fivesc.net/ - as I am really sorry but I will only enter my classes sentences.
What is the spelling?
ReplyDeleteI think I have seen this video... I think it was literacy..
I remember this video!
What spelling? We did use this video in Literacy. it should help you write 5 sentences.
ReplyDeleteThe LCWC one! Do we need to use the LCWC word to make the sentence?
DeleteMrs TN how do we watch the video?
DeleteYes now I know.
DeleteUse any spellings. This is nothing to do with our class spellings.
DeleteMrs TN I already did the 5 sentences at Saturday,
DeleteIn where?
DeleteAt the video the place were really nonsense.
ReplyDeleteIt was nonsense because instead of the sea it was a sky!
I see that the turtle were much bigger than the ship.
The was only one person on the ship he were really old grandpa.
There were not much thing on the ship, no food or water, but there is only two thing telescope and an old wood box.
I chose the second one you did.
DeleteI like the other blog.
ReplyDeleteThere was a old man flying in a boat with lots of machines to help the boat fly.Soon the boat's machine started to stop, but he did't fall.Then he saw lots of turtle flying and then he put a brown rope to a turtle's neck.Suddenly the rope is broken,the old man was sad and worried he would be stuck in the sky.After that the last turtle came,so the old man jumped to the turtle's back...he was so amazed he landed in a amazing Island!
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DeleteThe sky was so peaceful.
ReplyDeleteEverything moved slowly including the music.
The ship was floating and not moving.
I wish I could fly like the turtles.
I wish I could have an adventure like that.
Number 34
DeleteOnly once in a lifetime the man saw a large turtel flying.Only once in a lifetime the man jump so far on the turtel.Only once in a lifetime the man stuck at a high sky that no body see.Only once in a lifetime the man fly with a large turtel.After the story: Maybe the turtel was going to their own house with the man.
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DeleteThe old man we're pulling a rope to take something.
ReplyDeleteThen he heard a big noise and it was an enourmous turtle.
He saw that turtle flying and there we're lot's and lot's of them.
He was thinking about to fix the ship but he cannot so he use the turtle to help him move.
Suddenly the rope began to brake and the ship stop's and he saw the last turtle then he jump down and he live he's ship and he continue his big journey.
He also thinking to travel the world and he was going for an adventure.
Only five sentences!
Delete1. The man is driving the hot air ballon. 2. There were so many turtles flying in the air. 3. The turtle is pulling the hot air ballon. 4. Turtles are going at the same way. 5. The man is jumping to the turtle two times.
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DeleteIn the morning the man was fixing his flying ship.
ReplyDeleteThen something fell down and he almost cry.
After that he saw a group of flying turtles.
Then he saw one and grab the rope and it was on the turtle's neck but it broke.
In the end he saw a small turtle and he was sad because he need to leave the ship.
Number 31
DeleteA man was living on a flying boat.
ReplyDeleteHe wished to get out of the boat.
Then he saw turtles.
He was very surprised.
He climbed in one of the turtles.
Number 30
DeleteOnce in a lifetime, an old man called Archie,Archie was going on a holiday. He went on a cruise ship called 'One Direction'. Suddenly the ship sank deeply, but he is the only one who can survive. After a few years something magic happends... his ship fly up to the sky. At that moment he saw thousand enourmous turtle, at last the ship couldn't sail, so he tide a rope on a turtle and finally it brokes.
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DeleteThe man need to get out of the sky.
ReplyDeleteThe man saw a giat turtle at the sky.
When the man jump off at the turtle he is thinking that he will miss his flying boat.
The man heard that the turtle shout and he was surprice.
Only 4 sentences, you need to write 5!
DeleteOnly once in the life time the man stuck in the high sky.Only once in lifetime the man saw a huge turtel flying.Only once in lifetime the man jump so far to go on the turtel.Only once in a lifetime the man fly with the huge turtel.After the story:Maybe the turtel bring the man to their home.
ReplyDeleteI choose your other comment.
DeleteMrs TN I did do the 5 sentence but why its doesn't o the blogpage?
ReplyDeleteYou have to wait for me to go on the blog......
Delete1. The man was suprised when he saw giant turtles flying. 2. I think there were 10 turtles flying. 3. One turtle was left behind.4. The rope was broken because the turtle pull to strong. 5. I think the man and the turtle will go to a king house
ReplyDeleteI published you other entry.
DeleteThe old man was fixing the ship.He saw a gigantic turtle flying and he couldn't believe it.HE also thinking about to make his ship move.So he throw a rope on to the turtle's neck.Suddenly the rope began to brake but he saw the last turtle and he jump on the turtle and he continue his juorney and he was thinking that he could fly around the world and he think's he had an adventures
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DeleteOops sorry I forgot where Iput the 5 sentences.
ReplyDeleteNo I think you mean full stop not 5 sentences!
DeleteMrs Nicholson i already done it.
ReplyDeleteMrs TN when are you going to post the 5 sentences?I'am waiting to add a comment about it.
ReplyDeleteI add a comment on other people's 5 sentences in another school.
ReplyDeleteThe man travelling in the sky using his boat with air balloon.
ReplyDeleteThe man lost his engine so he was stuck in the middle of the clouds.
The man need to get out of the sky.
The man wanted to catch the giant turtle to get away from the boat balloon.
The flying boat was stuck so the man was thinking that he will miss his flying boat so he jumped off the giant turtle.
number 37
DeleteOnce in life time there was wooden boat.
ReplyDeleteAnd the onwner of the ship was an old man.
Suddenly it got brocken a bit.
The old man got a brown dark.
A huge army of turtls heading to the boat.
Number 36
DeleteThe man need to move the huge,long ship.
ReplyDeleteThen he saw a enormous huge turtle flying.
He use the long,thick rope, then the rope is pulled by the turtle.
After that saw another small turtle.
Finally he jump and sit on the turtles back.
Number 38
ReplyDeleteNow there is only 37 people did the 5 sentences challenge!
ReplyDeleteThe man was stuck on a big floating ship.
ReplyDeleteHe saw a flying turtle in the land of nonsense he was in.
He threw a rope around a flying turtles neck so he could move and not be stuck.
Then he saw a smaller turtle.
He decided to jump off the ship and on to the turtles back.
Thank you Nate. Great sentences. Ask your teacher to check out - http://fivesc.net/ - as I am very sorry but I will only enter my class work.
DeleteI watched the video and it was about a man and flying turtles. This man tried to strap a rope around a turtle's neck because his ship wasn't running and able to move. He was hoping that the turtle would pull his ship but it didn't work. Then there was this other turtle and he jumped on it's back. Then he flew off with all of the other turtles.
ReplyDeleteThank you katie. Ask your teacher to check out the five sentnce challenge webpage - http://fivesc.net/ - as I am really sorry but I will only enter my classes sentences.
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